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Good morning, team:)

I have added a conclusion, removed part of the introduction, and changed the Lynch reference to include the year, thereby fixing the intext citations. Let me know what you think, and feel free to change the conclusion any way you deem appropriate. I would like to post by 7 pm tonight, and as we should all be posting the same thing, how about if we come to agreement by 6pm? updated as of 6:50am, 11/9/10

Looks good:) In the checklist Dr. Allen mentions space between paragraphs, so yes, I think we should keep them. I have not heard from Sharon. I would like to post earlier than tomorrow, but that doesn't look like it's going to happen... Should we edit the beginning now, to reflect what we actually have?

Hi group - Laura I went through what you posted and made some additional edits. I double spaced between sections (on the rubric, this is required - do you think we need to do this between paragraphs also?) I made a few grammatical changes, etc. and I like what you did with Cherri and I's part. Have you emailed Sharon at all? If not, I will go ahead and email her later to see how she is doing on her part. Thanks! - Megan I am going through to make any necessary edits and looking into Cherri and I's parts to see if it needs more revision. Thanks for everything! - Megan

Okay, I added the references in the correct location, I put spaces between the paragraphs *per the rubric, and I added a "further information" ending to Aliona's part.

I combined Megan and Cherri's parts, but I think we all need to decide if it needs further revision.

I also fixed the reference section and put Cherri's links in.

Also, if we do not hear from Sharon, we will need to edit the beginning of the project to take out assessments, etc. which was her part.

Here is the most updated version 6:30 am (11-8-10):



Thanks Laura - I will look through this tonight! Also, forgot to mention that I only put the names after each section so we could keep track of what we had, were missing, etc. - Megan

Sorry for including this on our discussion on webcourses and here - just wasn't sure what you all checked the most.

I attached the document we can work off of. So far Laura and I's parts are included. I also wrote up a background, but feel free to add to it or make any necessary edits.

I am not sure the formatting is transferring correctly, but regardless, all the information should be there.

Thanks!

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﻿**October 31, 2010: Here is Laura's proposed entry. Read and respond, please! **